Wednesday, July 26, 2006

i fell in love with the thought of you
lived among the pauses
inhaled during commas
released after periods

i caught the kiss you blew my way
felt it warm my cheek
then gently removed it
placed it a glass box
with crystal ribbons
added it to my curio cabinet
of curiousities
right next to your pillow talk
and corner of your heart
kept in a wooden box
you had diligently carved
for its safekeeping

locked tight without a key
i never had the answer
but i feel it still sometimes
when my mind is quiet
sweet nothings escape
through intended pinholes
lapping at my earlobes
until childish giggles emerge from my throat

beckoning purity to return to its origin
the two dance across my soft curves
spinning 'round and 'round
only to be carried lovingly
back through iron keyholes
where the solid sound of a beat could be heard

8 comments:

  1. I'm glad I stopped by your blog today....this lovely poem made me smile.

    thanks sis!

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  2. "i fell in love with the thought of you
    lived among the pauses
    inhaled during commas
    released after periods"

    *sigh* light and "fluffy" in a "slow smirk becoming a wide smile" kinda way! i like it!

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  3. "i caught the kiss you blew my way
    felt it warm my cheek
    then gently removed it
    placed it a glass box
    with crystal ribbons
    added it to my curio cabinet
    of curiousities
    right next to your pillow talk
    and corner of your heart
    kept in a wooden box
    you had diligently carved
    for its safekeeping," I believe I have one word for the aforementioned, YES...

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  4. and the butterfly continues to spread her wings....wow...

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  5. Anonymous9:35 AM

    Wow!! This is beautiful. I especially love this verse:

    "beckoning purity to return to its origin
    the two dance across my soft curves
    spinning 'round and 'round
    only to be carried lovingly
    back through iron keyholes
    where the solid sound of a beat could be heard"

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  6. These lines represent a place where I currently exist. Thank you for this piece, it is absolutely darling...

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  7. lived among the pauses
    inhaled during commas
    released after periods

    Very nice!

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  8. Anonymous12:59 PM

    This was beautiful. I am so glad I stopped by.

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